Density of LOVE
Mid Summer is a typical story about kids on there summer days. The story gives us an idea what or how kids think at there age on a summer. The most interesting thing that I noticed in the story is that I think at there age they already have sexual urges, I think the children in the story are not Pilipino, because children here in our country are not that. Well these assumptions are based from my childhood experiences. I like the part where the kids use candies to describe other kids it was weird and funny. It’s a good indication that they are still children, yet at that summer time it marked a very important part of there life. Its that stage that they are maturing.
The other thing that caught my attention is the scene where the brother of the guy saw the two kids having fun and said SHIT. Because he saw his little brother having fun with a; not so good looking girl. So after the older brother took his brother and said he will introduce him to real éclairs. Éclairs are something like a metaphor for girls, using metaphors for girls its interesting I haven’t tried it yet.
I The Marriage its about the struggle of a husband that is not able to do his THING with his wife because his incapacitated. In there relationship its both of them are struggling well in the case of the wife she is kinda suppressed since they were married and for the guy he had a stroke the problem is his kinda; how may I say this ahhh his worthless, because he cant do anything.
In both of the stories Mid Summer and The Marriage I was uneasy when I read them. Both of them are very short and easy to understand but when I read it a few times more I realize that the story is telling more than what it seems. When you read Flash fiction you should pay attention to all the details to get the real message of the author its entertaining.
Ahh lesson learned from the stories love can be really happy and it can also be really sad. I realized that when you grow old the degree of love change, it will have more density compared to teenage love. Also when you are still young you should make the best out of life learn from experience to be a better person in the end and be prepared to for the consequences on making critical decision in our life
Mid Summer is a typical story about kids on there summer days. The story gives us an idea what or how kids think at there age on a summer. The most interesting thing that I noticed in the story is that I think at there age they already have sexual urges, I think the children in the story are not Pilipino, because children here in our country are not that. Well these assumptions are based from my childhood experiences. I like the part where the kids use candies to describe other kids it was weird and funny. It’s a good indication that they are still children, yet at that summer time it marked a very important part of there life. Its that stage that they are maturing.
The other thing that caught my attention is the scene where the brother of the guy saw the two kids having fun and said SHIT. Because he saw his little brother having fun with a; not so good looking girl. So after the older brother took his brother and said he will introduce him to real éclairs. Éclairs are something like a metaphor for girls, using metaphors for girls its interesting I haven’t tried it yet.
I The Marriage its about the struggle of a husband that is not able to do his THING with his wife because his incapacitated. In there relationship its both of them are struggling well in the case of the wife she is kinda suppressed since they were married and for the guy he had a stroke the problem is his kinda; how may I say this ahhh his worthless, because he cant do anything.
In both of the stories Mid Summer and The Marriage I was uneasy when I read them. Both of them are very short and easy to understand but when I read it a few times more I realize that the story is telling more than what it seems. When you read Flash fiction you should pay attention to all the details to get the real message of the author its entertaining.
Ahh lesson learned from the stories love can be really happy and it can also be really sad. I realized that when you grow old the degree of love change, it will have more density compared to teenage love. Also when you are still young you should make the best out of life learn from experience to be a better person in the end and be prepared to for the consequences on making critical decision in our life